Now if there is gonna be anyone who wants to be smart and say %26quot;This is too much to read! Noone is gonna respond to that%26quot; Then don%26#039;t read it or responde thank you!!!! But for those who like a read, read this..
This is the way SPiderman 3 should have went in my eyes. Not only is this my version of Spiderman 3, but it%26#039;s also my version of a true Punisher reboot. This movie would have been the first to ever feature the comic book character, The Punisher before he is in his own movies since he began as a SPiderman sub character. So here it is. The plot would be Peter is trying to think of a way to propose to MJ. While walking throuch Central park one night, a comit hits about 5 miles away. Peter goes to investegate. The symbiot sneeks into his backpack. Then he goes to see MJ%26#039;s new play. After it is done, everyone apllaus with joy at her performance and him and MJ go back stage to plan a dinner. After that, on his way home in the alley, Peter gets ambushed by Harry in his Green Goblin costume. Underestimating SPiderman, Harry gets defeated and is badly injured. Peter goes home and sleeps and that when the symbiot merges into him. Next morning, police sirens go off and we cut to the next scene where 2 criminals are running through a house thats abandoned. It is revealed that they are running from a guy in a one peice black armored suit with a white skull on his chest and wearing white combat boots with white gloves(Punisher%26#039;s classic suit). One guy bails out a window and the other gets caught up by Punisher. As P is about to extract private justice on the man, the floor breaks beneath the criminal and he falls to the first floor conveantly(spelling) in front of the cops. Peter goes into work and is introduced to a new employee. A big muscled bound man named Eddie Brock. As with Harry, he is now building a new amor suit and upgrading weapons while recovering from a broken leg. He wants vengence on SPiderman. However, he realizes he might not have to do the deed directly. With the military connections he has, he goes to an ex specail op who recommends him a number to a man named micro chip. Harry comes up with a plan to incriminate SPiderman to make it look legit. He sends info that SPiderman has been using his status of trust from the city to undergoe his own enterprise and take money from charities and banks. Micro chip sends all this information to The Punisher. Next night, police sirens go off and Peter chooses his new black outfit to go fight crime. Since this black outfit brings out the ungliness in him, he beats 3 criminals nearly to death. Acting out of character, he retreats to a side of a skyscrapper to look at the engagement ring that he wants to give to MJ. Thinking about what is happening to him, a gun shot goes off. A bullet misses his head by inches. Followed by an arsonall of gun fire, SPiderman leaps around for safety. He goes to a roof top, but not to his knowledge, triggers off a nearby anti personel mine. It explodes and the force knocks SPiderman on his back leaving him disoriented. He sees a figure appraoch him with a gun fixing on his head. He says, %26quot;who are you?!%26quot; SPiderman%26#039;s senses go off allowing him to dodge an oncomming bullet and he sweaps the man on his back and flings a web at him. %26quot;Look buddy! I don%26#039;t know what your game is but you need a time out!%26quot; Quickly, The Punisher shoots SPiderman with a dart coated with a lethal venom which because of SPiderman%26#039;s body chemestry, only weakens him to a normal human strength which aloows the Punisher to undergo hand to hand combat with SPiderman in which he wipes the floor with the inexperienced kid. Then the venom wears off and at full strength, SPiderman punches the Punisher 15 feets away from him. The 2 not being able to out do eachother, part ways that night. In work, Peter and Eddie are trying to get a story from a man who knows the wearabouts of a psychopathic killer(not the punisher). Peter recommends that Eddie just take the story and shows him who to go to(not knowing the man he directs him to is just a blabbering idiot). After Eddie gets the story, Joan Jameson wants the story of a New York vigilanty covered and also finds out that the coverage Eddie comes up with is fake and has him fired. Eddie hating PEter for is direction will play a part in the 4th where it is Eddie%26#039;s ark when he finds out A: he has cancer, B: his father disowns him, and C: he comes in contact with the symbiot. Spiderman hears a call comming in from the police that hostages have been taken and are on the bridge. Not only does SPiderman take the call, but not to his knowledge, so has the Punisher. Without knowing it, the 2 team up to save the inncocent and defeat the bad guys. However during all this, SPiderman sees how this man takes the law into his own hands. It croses his mind that this man fights crime by doing evil but why is he trying to kill SPiderman? After everyone is saved, Punisher fixes his attention on Spiderman in a scene where breath taking action takes place as the 2 fight for about 7 minutes. Spiderman towards the end, kicks the Punisher in the chest, knocking him out. He then picks up a pipe and is about to inpale this man with it. Then he steps back and drops the pipe knowing that all this bad energy has come from the symbiot. A church bell goes off and Peter sense that the suit is uncomfortable with it. In agony, he leave the unconcious assasin and goes home to think things through. LAter that night, Peter comes up with the idea of maybe that can be a way to get rid of the symbiot. He goes to church and hits the bell over and over unti the creature seperates itself from him. Then it faster than light, disappears into the darkness(cliffhaner scene for the 4th movie). After all is done, Peter goes to Aunt May. While all this is happening, after what MJ has seen on the new about this man trying to kill Spiderman, she spots him in an alley and follows him quietly to one of his hideouts. She then confronts him about as to why he is trying to murder the savior of the city. He tells her the information he has, and that it came directly from a man named Harry. MJ nearly collapses from finding that out. She runs to Peter to tell im everything. Now Peter must find a way to clear his name. (I%26#039;m open to suggestions on this part as to how he does that. I ofcoures cannot respond to you but after all, this is just for fun.) After that, the next time the 2 meet, Punisher tells him that he has been dooped into beleive SPiderman was a crminal and seems to be remorsefull about it at the same time wanting blood from Harry Osborne. Spiderman askes him again, who he is. The man responds, my name is Frank Castle. The 2 team up in order to find Harry who is not at home. Harry has completed his Hob Goblin suit and has captured Joan Jameson and Gwan Stacy(he does%26#039;nt catpure MJ because they are friends and does%26#039;nt want to put her in harms way. So he goes for other people Peter would want to help.) The climatic battler sequence between SPider/Punisher vs. Hobgoblin would be about 12 minutes of breath taking epic action leaving Harry wounded in the gut by a armor piercing bullet and SPiderman swing kicking him to the ground. As Harry lays there bleeding but survivable, Frank and Spiderman goes and rescue Jaon and Gwen who are hangin from a rope 100 feet above the ground. After they have them to safety, Frank goes over to the wounded Harry.
Harry: So you%26#039;ve come to finish me?
Frank: Somethin like that.
He fixes the gun to his head and then SPiderman steps infront to try to plead with Frank to spare his life.
Spiderman: Please! He needs help! He%26#039;s my friend. Let me tak him in!
Frank: Why? So he can get put into the system as a crazy man and get out in 2? He is a menace and needs to be put down.
Spiderman: Please!!! LEt him go.
With the thoughts of SPiderman and how he almost killed him a few times, Frank breaks down a and thinks over his actions.
He looks down and his face changes from the signature snear to a very human Frank. He raises his head and looks at SPiderman.
Frank: I didn%26#039;t want this. To become this. I did%26#039;nt have a choice.
Spiderman: We always have a choice. You have a choice when you commit evil to defeat evil.
Frank: I had a family once. We we having picnic at Central Park one afternoon to celebrate my homecomming from my tour in the Persian Gulf. Then a gangland shooting happened. The Gambino brothers shot an informant. Not wanting to leave any witnesses behind, they shot me and my family. My wife Maria. My children Janice and Frank Jr. I woke up in the hospital after being in a coma for 3 weeks. They told me my wife dies on the scene and my kids died hours after. The police had the 2 in custody and wre waiting for me to regain me strenght so I could testify. When the time came, I took the stand and afterwards, the judge let them off on a technecality. The men that took my family away from me were going to walk free. Something inside of me changed. I realized the law can%26#039;t always protect the innocent. So I took it into my own hands and later that night, I killed tha Gambino brothers and have waged a war on crime. A war I know I wont win. But a war I will fight till the day I die. Ive done terrible things to you. I wish I could take them back. Im not asking you to forgive me. I%26#039;m just hoping you can understand me.
Spiderman: Ive done terrible things too. I also lost my Unlce from a shooting........
Frank: I didn%26#039;t choose to be this. Theres nothing left now.
Spiderman%26quot;...... I forgive you. You were giving a second chance Frank.
Frank: Frank Castle is dead........ call me..... The Punisher.
In the end, SPiderman takes injure Harry to the hospital and protects his identiy as the man who kidnapped Jaon and Gwen.
I put some time into this. Whether you like it or not, the only thing I ask in return is can you give me a good nice long response? Thats what I look foward to the most. Thanks fellow SPiderman fans:)
What if Spiderman 3 and The Punisher went like this instead of the trash we got?
Good story, I especially like how you had Frank aka the Punisher explain why he kills criminals it made it pretty interesting. This would of been good for a movie but if I%26#039;m not mistaken The Punisher has had a movie or 2 they just didn%26#039;t come out that recently. Maybe you could just submit this for a movie plot to the guys who are gonna direct Spiderman 4. They%26#039;re probably going to make the Spiderman movies keep on going until they can%26#039;t get any more money out of it.
Reply:That was good as a fanfic but it wouldn%26#039;t be better than Spidey3 or The Punisher. Report It
Reply:OK, no one will read this nerd fan-fiction lol.
Reply:wow!huge, sorry i did not read it because it too longgggggggg!!!!! but i think it might be!
Reply:yeah way but i read the end parts to much to read but you would be an awesome some writer and if i were a director i would for sure go with your work
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